Post-Production (Editing)

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Feedback from Helen on the Rough Cut:


Things to change

  1. Swap order of interviews - Gareth first instead of Robbert
  2. Use Gareth interview throughout documentary (in a way he becomes second presenter)
  3. re-arrange the script so it will make sense with Gareths part (there is a separate blog post on this)
  4. Add in more commentary - so it it is smoother when you change subject
  5. Use footage (cut aways) which is relevant to what is being said
Positive points
  1. Gareth
  2. The opening
  3. Presenter


Feedback from Helen on the Fine Cut:

            

Things to change: 

  1. Pull music back a bit when presenter is too low 
  2. Change a few images which repeat if possible 
  3. Tighten it  a bit (a few walks) 

Positive Points: 

  1. End is enjoyable 
  2. Material is handled well 
  3. Clear story 

Colour correction: 

As the cutaways had a yellow colour to them we edited them so they suit the rest of the documentary. Below are the results: 








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