Script Development

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Draft Script - 

rough idea of what I thought would film it and what would be happening in each verse of the poem.



Feedback from Helen: 
- make sure I emphasise why to my actors (why they feel that way) 
- maybe have the characters meet somehow and then show they are in love? 
- make the script dramatic 
- add depth to story for context 
- clarify characters and locations 


Final Script -

Taking Helens advice into consideration and the change of idea , I have edited the script but also developed the characters to help the actors (different blog post)

  

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